Monday, July 19, 2010

CRUCIAL TIMES

HALLE'S DIAGNOSIS

Halle becomes an elder, but she still continues to work until  she was diagnosed with a rare disease. Halle got so weak and was hospitalized, she retired from her job after the doctor told her that she have to because she still need to be examined further. The family went home with broken hearts, they were all hoping that Halle will be okay soon. 

 After six moths of continuous treatments, Halle regain her strength again. She started to work as a self-employed writer - she writes fiction books but her best seller was romance novels. Marlon was so happy with Halle's achievements and that she bravely fought her disease although the doctor didn't assured them that she'll still be cured. One time, Halle became too busy with work that she had sleepless nights and she sometimes skip meals. Marlon became too worried that something might happen again to her wife "Honey, I don't think that it's still healthy for you to be workaholic..we all know that you've been through alot these past few months and I don't want to happen that again. ever.." Halle looked at her husband straight to the eye and smiled "I'm okay honey, you don't have to worry so much" and gave him a kiss. 

The next day while Halle was about to leave the house, she became unconscious and fall off the stairs. Marlon ran towards the noise and was shocked upon seeing her wife on the ground. He called everyone and they quickly rushed Halle to the hospital. They were still in shock and trembling, nervous on what the doctor has to say. The doctor came out of the ER and told the family about Halle's condition, they're all quiet and listen intently to the doctor while holding on to their tears. "Halle is in a coma right now, I don't  know when or if she will still wake up" Keshia hug her grandpop tighly and Grady do the same to Reign. 


The next day while everyone was still asleep, Marlon hold Halle's hand and began talking to her "Good morning honey, aren't you oversleeping..well i kinda miss you, hope you'll be awake soon. I'll be out for awhile okay, I'll buy us some food do you like anything? well, i'll just decide for you" then he left after giving her wife a kiss.


When Reign woke up she went immediately to her Mom's side "Hi Mom, I miss you!" as Reign kissed and hugged her Mom. Keshia saw her Mom and it makes her sad to see her that way. "Mom, grandma will be okay.." as Keshia console her Mom. After they had breakfast everyone go home to get some things except Marlon, when he was left with his wife alone he again talk to her "I'm so full, too bad I can't have breakfast with you and I'm missing it,..so are you..so please wake up..for me..i love you so much.." says Marlon as tears starting to fall down his face "But if ..if ..you really want to go..i'll let you go..even if it'll break my heart so much" and then he heard the machine's beep runs flat.

The rest of the family went back to the hospital and saw Marlon sitting outside the room leaning against the wall eyes closed. "Dad, why are you here outside?" asked Reign "She's gone" and tears fall down again from Marlon's face. Their face went blank and tears fell uncontrollably, they hugged and console each other. Later that day they decided to have Halle's body to be cremated and be brougth home.


MARLON'S ON THE VERGE OF DEATH

Later that day, the doctor talked to Reign. "I'm so sorry to tell you but your Dad had a heart attack and it was not an ordinary attack he was now paralyzed" Reign couldn't help but cry upon hearing the doctor. Grady comforted her while their daughter was outside waiting.

"Mom how's g.pa? will he be okay? can he go home now?" asked Keshia who was still crying and concerned about her favorite BFF g.pa. "Honey, g.pop will stay here for awhile until he's okay..but not now" as Reign hugged her daughter. She knows that it's not yet the right time to tell her about her g.pop, she might not like the news as well. Grady and Keshia went home while Reign stayed at the hospital, she can't go to her dad's rom because it was restricted..she can just see him on the window. "Dad I'm so sorry for what happen..I shouldn't have said things to you..I'm so sorry Dad.." as she cried and regret what happen. "But if Mom was there waiting for you..hold her hand Dad.." from there the machine beeps flat. Reign called the doctor, but nothing happen. "I'm so sorry.." as the docotor left the room and instructed the nurse on what to do.


 










 






 

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Monday, July 19, 2010

CRUCIAL TIMES

Posted by RL at 11:54 AM
HALLE'S DIAGNOSIS

Halle becomes an elder, but she still continues to work until  she was diagnosed with a rare disease. Halle got so weak and was hospitalized, she retired from her job after the doctor told her that she have to because she still need to be examined further. The family went home with broken hearts, they were all hoping that Halle will be okay soon. 

 After six moths of continuous treatments, Halle regain her strength again. She started to work as a self-employed writer - she writes fiction books but her best seller was romance novels. Marlon was so happy with Halle's achievements and that she bravely fought her disease although the doctor didn't assured them that she'll still be cured. One time, Halle became too busy with work that she had sleepless nights and she sometimes skip meals. Marlon became too worried that something might happen again to her wife "Honey, I don't think that it's still healthy for you to be workaholic..we all know that you've been through alot these past few months and I don't want to happen that again. ever.." Halle looked at her husband straight to the eye and smiled "I'm okay honey, you don't have to worry so much" and gave him a kiss. 

The next day while Halle was about to leave the house, she became unconscious and fall off the stairs. Marlon ran towards the noise and was shocked upon seeing her wife on the ground. He called everyone and they quickly rushed Halle to the hospital. They were still in shock and trembling, nervous on what the doctor has to say. The doctor came out of the ER and told the family about Halle's condition, they're all quiet and listen intently to the doctor while holding on to their tears. "Halle is in a coma right now, I don't  know when or if she will still wake up" Keshia hug her grandpop tighly and Grady do the same to Reign. 


The next day while everyone was still asleep, Marlon hold Halle's hand and began talking to her "Good morning honey, aren't you oversleeping..well i kinda miss you, hope you'll be awake soon. I'll be out for awhile okay, I'll buy us some food do you like anything? well, i'll just decide for you" then he left after giving her wife a kiss.


When Reign woke up she went immediately to her Mom's side "Hi Mom, I miss you!" as Reign kissed and hugged her Mom. Keshia saw her Mom and it makes her sad to see her that way. "Mom, grandma will be okay.." as Keshia console her Mom. After they had breakfast everyone go home to get some things except Marlon, when he was left with his wife alone he again talk to her "I'm so full, too bad I can't have breakfast with you and I'm missing it,..so are you..so please wake up..for me..i love you so much.." says Marlon as tears starting to fall down his face "But if ..if ..you really want to go..i'll let you go..even if it'll break my heart so much" and then he heard the machine's beep runs flat.

The rest of the family went back to the hospital and saw Marlon sitting outside the room leaning against the wall eyes closed. "Dad, why are you here outside?" asked Reign "She's gone" and tears fall down again from Marlon's face. Their face went blank and tears fell uncontrollably, they hugged and console each other. Later that day they decided to have Halle's body to be cremated and be brougth home.


MARLON'S ON THE VERGE OF DEATH

Later that day, the doctor talked to Reign. "I'm so sorry to tell you but your Dad had a heart attack and it was not an ordinary attack he was now paralyzed" Reign couldn't help but cry upon hearing the doctor. Grady comforted her while their daughter was outside waiting.

"Mom how's g.pa? will he be okay? can he go home now?" asked Keshia who was still crying and concerned about her favorite BFF g.pa. "Honey, g.pop will stay here for awhile until he's okay..but not now" as Reign hugged her daughter. She knows that it's not yet the right time to tell her about her g.pop, she might not like the news as well. Grady and Keshia went home while Reign stayed at the hospital, she can't go to her dad's rom because it was restricted..she can just see him on the window. "Dad I'm so sorry for what happen..I shouldn't have said things to you..I'm so sorry Dad.." as she cried and regret what happen. "But if Mom was there waiting for you..hold her hand Dad.." from there the machine beeps flat. Reign called the doctor, but nothing happen. "I'm so sorry.." as the docotor left the room and instructed the nurse on what to do.


 










 






 

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